first and foremost, i love your style. most of your work consists of great humor and interesting perspectives. this piece is no exception. my favorite part about this is the connection from the boy to godzilla back there. i think i prefer the idea of having him wear a simple, stylish dino jacket versus a full body dino suit. the jacket seems to work better for the audience you're aiming towards.
there are a couple things that throw me off. one is the hand holding the cigarette. seems like the cig is about to slip out between his fingers. his hand could be a little more firm. but i can see why it's draw loosely. another thing, the sketchy lines are somewhat distracting, especially the lines for the cigarette smoke.